高考英语书面表达致胜宝典
作者:李爱华 … 更新日期:2007-12-16 点击数: 等级:
书面表达是高考中的重头戏,能体现考生的语言综合运用能力,但在高考紧张压力之下如何快速成就考场美文,这对很多考生来说是个令人头疼的问题。为此很多考生报怨:作文之难,难于上青天?然而凡事皆有其内在规律性,通其理,表其情,究其形,由表及里,形神俱备,优秀作文尽在我手。本文将从遣词、造句、连贯、谋篇、版面净洁五个方面全面阐述高考书面致胜之道。
一、卷面整洁化
卷面就像人的脸一样,它给阅卷人以第一视觉,因此印象最为深刻。书面表达也是如此,不论你运用了多么复杂的语法结构,多么高级的词汇以及行文多么紧凑连贯,如果卷面像一把乱草,则很难让阅卷人了解你的文采。阅卷人因此匆忙阅卷,走马观花,这样一来,你的心血白费,你的劳动无效。因此要求:书写规范,态度认真,字体工整,切莫乱涂乱划。与此同时还应注意版面设计美观大方,切莫写得到边到沿,这样会给人很堵的感觉;注意两边页面边距不要留得过大,只写在中间,那样不够美观。
二、词汇高级化
新的评价标准要求我们尽量使用高级词汇。一是张扬个性表现出与众不同,使人一看有一种新颖特别的感觉。二是高级词汇的选取和运用,使阅卷者对考生的英语功底有一定程度的了解。但高级词汇并不是越难越好,越长越好,主要是指那些大部分考生都想不到用且又符合英美国家表达习惯的方式,例如一些常规词的特殊用法,或是通过构词法而形成的词汇、复合词、名词用作动词,象声词等。
1. ①A new railway is being built in my home town.
②A new railway is under construction in my home town.
2. ①A strong storm happened in our city last night.
②A strong storm hit (struck) our city last night.
3. ①Some of my classmates are for the movie.
②Some of my classmates are in favour of the movie.
上述各句中的①都是一般表述法,即大部分学生可能用到的,而②却与众不同,用词独到考究,更新活出众,更能显示你的遣词造句的语言才华。
三、文辞优美化
要想使所写的文章凸显文采,展示综合运用语言的能力,就要能写出几个漂亮的句子来,这就要求在平时的学习过程中大量地积累课内外一切有用的习惯表达和典型的句子,如强调句、倒装句、虚拟句、感叹句、非谓语动词句型、it句型、with结构以及各种典型的从句等,真正做到句式多样,句型结构复杂,使用恰当得体,尽量避免使用结构单一、长度相同的单句,以免使所写文章平淡无奇,缺乏生气,读起来索然无味。
1、基本句型布大局,多种句型来交替
(1) ①people can well use Internet Bars only in this way.
②Only in this way can Internet Bars be well used by people.
(2)①I suggest Internet Bars should be strictly managed and should direct young kids to surf the web.
②I suggest Internet Bars be under strict supervision and young kids be guided to surf the web.
(3) ①I have found a house. It is 25 square meters. It has a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.
②I have found a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.
2、凭关系、并列、复合恰当介入
(1) ①I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time. Now I am interested in football.
②I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.
以上根据两个单句间的并列关系或转折关系,合并成有相应关系的并列句。
(2)I hope you come and see for yourself some day.
(3)You want to know what is going on in schools in China.
以上为含宾语从句的复合句。
(4)The main subjects I studied at school included…
(5)The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street , which is not far from Jiaxin Chinese School.
以上为含定语从句的复合句。
(6)As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us.
(7)Before we knew it , we had to say good-bye to the workers.
以上为含时间状语从句的复合句
(8)The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.
含结果状语从句的复合句
(9) Hope you don’t have to wait as long as we did .
含比较状语从句的复合句
(10)Hope things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce the learning load.
四、衔接自然化
评分标准把衔接和连贯作为
一、卷面整洁化
卷面就像人的脸一样,它给阅卷人以第一视觉,因此印象最为深刻。书面表达也是如此,不论你运用了多么复杂的语法结构,多么高级的词汇以及行文多么紧凑连贯,如果卷面像一把乱草,则很难让阅卷人了解你的文采。阅卷人因此匆忙阅卷,走马观花,这样一来,你的心血白费,你的劳动无效。因此要求:书写规范,态度认真,字体工整,切莫乱涂乱划。与此同时还应注意版面设计美观大方,切莫写得到边到沿,这样会给人很堵的感觉;注意两边页面边距不要留得过大,只写在中间,那样不够美观。
二、词汇高级化
新的评价标准要求我们尽量使用高级词汇。一是张扬个性表现出与众不同,使人一看有一种新颖特别的感觉。二是高级词汇的选取和运用,使阅卷者对考生的英语功底有一定程度的了解。但高级词汇并不是越难越好,越长越好,主要是指那些大部分考生都想不到用且又符合英美国家表达习惯的方式,例如一些常规词的特殊用法,或是通过构词法而形成的词汇、复合词、名词用作动词,象声词等。
1. ①A new railway is being built in my home town.
②A new railway is under construction in my home town.
2. ①A strong storm happened in our city last night.
②A strong storm hit (struck) our city last night.
3. ①Some of my classmates are for the movie.
②Some of my classmates are in favour of the movie.
上述各句中的①都是一般表述法,即大部分学生可能用到的,而②却与众不同,用词独到考究,更新活出众,更能显示你的遣词造句的语言才华。
三、文辞优美化
要想使所写的文章凸显文采,展示综合运用语言的能力,就要能写出几个漂亮的句子来,这就要求在平时的学习过程中大量地积累课内外一切有用的习惯表达和典型的句子,如强调句、倒装句、虚拟句、感叹句、非谓语动词句型、it句型、with结构以及各种典型的从句等,真正做到句式多样,句型结构复杂,使用恰当得体,尽量避免使用结构单一、长度相同的单句,以免使所写文章平淡无奇,缺乏生气,读起来索然无味。
1、基本句型布大局,多种句型来交替
(1) ①people can well use Internet Bars only in this way.
②Only in this way can Internet Bars be well used by people.
(2)①I suggest Internet Bars should be strictly managed and should direct young kids to surf the web.
②I suggest Internet Bars be under strict supervision and young kids be guided to surf the web.
(3) ①I have found a house. It is 25 square meters. It has a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.
②I have found a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.
2、凭关系、并列、复合恰当介入
(1) ①I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time. Now I am interested in football.
②I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.
以上根据两个单句间的并列关系或转折关系,合并成有相应关系的并列句。
(2)I hope you come and see for yourself some day.
(3)You want to know what is going on in schools in China.
以上为含宾语从句的复合句。
(4)The main subjects I studied at school included…
(5)The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street , which is not far from Jiaxin Chinese School.
以上为含定语从句的复合句。
(6)As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us.
(7)Before we knew it , we had to say good-bye to the workers.
以上为含时间状语从句的复合句
(8)The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.
含结果状语从句的复合句
(9) Hope you don’t have to wait as long as we did .
含比较状语从句的复合句
(10)Hope things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce the learning load.
四、衔接自然化
评分标准把衔接和连贯作为




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